Morning
Song - Sylvia Plath
Love set you going like a fat gold watch.
The midwife slapped your footsoles, and your bald cry
Took its place among the elements.
Our voices echo, magnifying your arrival. New statue.
In a drafty museum, your nakedness
Shadows our safety. We stand round blankly as walls.
I’m no more your mother
Than the cloud that distils a mirror to reflect its
own slow
Effacement at the wind’s hand.
All night your moth-breath
Flickers among the flat pink roses. I wake to listen:
A far sea moves in my ear.
One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and floral
In my Victorian nightgown.
Your mouth opens clean as a cat’s. the window square
Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
Your handful of notes;
The clear vowels rise like balloons.
I have
chosen the poem Morning Song by
Sylvia Plath basically because I liked it, and it evoked
several images while I was reading it. In this poem we can see from the point
of view of a mother the different stages she goes through from her pregnancy to
the moment the baby utters her first sounds. First she describes with happiness
her pregnancy and the moment she gives birth to her child. Then, we are told
about her worries and fears as she gets up at night to see her baby is sleeping
peacefully. And finally, she describes her baby’s attempt to produce sounds in
the morning.
I associate
the poem with soft colours, such as white, grey, pastel pink because they symbolize
purity. For me, the purest thing in the world is a young baby. I tried to
include a picture that show every moment the mother describes. The poem makes
me feel peace, love, and tenderness.
This poem
could be related to the role of women played by Mrs Ramsay in To the Lighthouse. A kind of mother devoted
to her children, being unconditional. It also reminds me of the character of
Annette in Wide Sargasso Sea,
especially her relationship with her son, Pierre. As he was a handicapped child, she
focused her attention on him. Because he was weak, she had to protect him all
the time.
They are
three examples of caring and protective mothers.
Your poster brings together very tender images and music (a pity you haven't mentioned title &/or composer) of the innocence of a young infant. You have certainly succeeded in evoking the feelings mentioned. Good linking to prose texts, too.
ReplyDeleteBut what about these words and phrases: "magnifying your arrival", "its own slow effacement"; "cow-heavy and floral"? Could they suggest a different mood?
NB: handicap vs handicapped
The phrase "magnifying your arrival" may refer to the feelings of the people looking at the baby (parents, relatives, friends). It could suggest a feeling of pride at the birth of this baby.
ReplyDeleteThe phrase "cow-heavy and floral" may refer to how the mother looks like at night when she gets up to see her baby, and also to her body and the way it has changed after giving birth to her child.
I have checked with the dictionary the word handicap and I changed it.
Right! But "magnifying" would suggest their reaction does not bear proportion to the event itself, and "effacement" that she feels the baby has deprived her of her identity. That, together with your comment, could be taken to convey the mixed feelings many new mothers experience.
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