Sunday, April 22, 2012

A dreamer girl


A dreamer girl

I am a dreamer girl who likes planning
I wonder if I’ll ever live only for today
I see an horizon crowded with promising paths
I want to travel with my loved ones towards a sighted land
I am a dreamer girl who likes planning

I pretend to be a permanently positive person
I often feel the wind whispering words of encouragement
I worry about those with no maps to guide their ways
I cry when an innocent soul is driven to another route
I am a dreamer girl who likes planning

I understand we should mind our steps, though to stumble is humane
I dream all the stones help us build our dreamed castles
I try to land on a delightful tomorrow with my loved ones
I hope everyone will share some of my thoughts
I am a dreamer girl who likes planning


I chose this pattern because it enabled me to express some of my personality features, thoughts and feelings in an organised way. Besides, the example helped me compose the poem.

2 comments:

  1. You have chosen a very challenging pattern and created a beautiful poem. Thankd for letting us into your soul!

    NB: Cf pretend vs intend, human vs humane. Feel free to edit.

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